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医学SCI的Results部分写作技巧

2015-06-29 15:51  阅读(314)  评论(1)  分类:专业

     对一篇医学SCI论文来说,除了创新性和意义,最重要的就是展现论文的结果了。而针对不同的统计方法,结果描述也有所不同。如果您还只停留在一种句式,那样不仅会使文章显得死板,还会显得我们的英语非常匮乏。这里针对不同医学统计方法如何生动的描述结果进行了一些实例描述,希望对大家Results部分的写作有所帮助!




显著性差异分析

1)如果差异显著,可以这样描述:

a. …is higher/lower/increase/decrease…in/by/with or after the administration of A than/compared with B;

b. Significantly increased/decreased…was observed in A compared with B.

c.significant differences in… were observed/witnessed between A and B;

d.Enhanced/Decreased…inresponse to A/B was observed…;

e.A showed significant/better effect on…than/compared with B;

f.A significantly decreased/increase/improve….

2)如果差异有趋势,可以这样描述:

a.A similartrend was observed in…;

b.A compared to C additionally trended to…;

c.…tend to…in Acompared with B;

d.A tendency towards higher/lower…was seen in….

3)如果差异不显著或结果类似,可以这样描述:

a.No impact of A/B(A and B)on …was demonstrated in the presented experiment;

b.No effect on…occured with or after the administration of A/B(A and B);

c.No difference in …was observed/witnessed between A and B;

d.There was no difference in…;

e.…in A and B did not differ;

f.…was not significantly altered by…-treatment…;

g.…was similar in all(between)groups and ranged from…to….

4)如果两因素之间存在相互关系,比如干预和时间效应,可以这样描述:

a.A treatment ×period interaction/ An interaction of treatment ×week was observed for …as…(描述随时间变化);

b.There was an interaction of treatment ×time for….

另外,在描述结果时,可以尽量将两个相关的结果写在一句话中,用关联词链接,既可以使上下文衔接紧密,又可避免流水式写法。如:

a, …in A and B did not differ, but… tended to be higher/lower with/in A/B;

b,…remained at arelatively low level, although a trend was observed for the increase/decrease in A/B in comparison with B/A;

c, A/B were not found to affect/have no effect on…,but tendency to…was observed in B/A;

d, Despite/Inspite of no effect on…, A/B significantly increased/improved…;

e,Similar tendencies, albeit not confirmed statistically/although not statistically significant, were observed in the remaining groups in which patients were…;

f,A negative effect of…on…and a positive effect on…were observed.




相关性分析

a, …is very negative signifcant correlated with…;

b,There is asignificant negative correlation between…and…;

c,Rises in…paralleled increase in…;

d,…revealed asignificant correlation with…;

e,There was aninteraction between…and….


生存分析

a,Survival curvesaccording to Kaplan-Meier showed: 1.Survival at…years is…%,with 95% CI between…and…; 2.Survival estimate is …% at…years;

b,Thereoverall…-,…%and…%,respectively;

c, The overallsurvival rates of …were calculated by the Kaplan-Meier, with…%,…%and…%at…,…and…years, respectively;

d,The survivorship analysis(Kaplan-Meier)showed a…% survival of …after…years.


 

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